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Prisoner Conan

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there is only one conan, and Arnold Schwarzenegger is!!!!
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

Well since this is just a lineart I could give full credit in some spots because I know you'll end up coloring it.

My main critique with your work is that you lines have no weight. When you don't weight the lines, the image looks very flat (especially without color). Even with color, weighted lines really add to the impact of a piece. As illustrators it's out job to give the appearance of 3-dimensionality on paper (or digitally, whatever). So it's very important you learn to do that.

Some general rules of thumb for weighting is every line that turns away from the light source must be bolder. Finer detail lines should be thinner than the outer line, and judging by your style, spotting some blacks (in the boots for example) wouldn't hurt.

Hope this helps.